AUTHOR: SUZANNE HART
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First of all, if the male lead is blonde in the story please dont select a brown haired man for your cover art.
Second, punctuation is supposed to help you tell a story. Use it wisely.
I will say that the idea of the story is a good one. I actually liked the premise and the twists that made up the meat of this book. I just had too hard of a time navigating the sentence structure. I'd have to do more research, but I'd wager the author is not a primary english speaker.
I did find a continuity error practically in the first paragraph which I'll likely email the author about. Maybe she can fix it in the ebook.
Recommend: Maybe. If you can ignore the punctuation issues. I've heard not everyone is as picky antitrust as I am.
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